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 title: Mapping the Unspoken
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-This workshop aims to collectively visualize the unspoken happening in a makerspace/hackerspace; to analyze the invisibility of conditioning deriving from certain habits and practices; and, finally, to rethink what behaviour should be promoted in order to embody the values which diversity implies.
+This workshop aims to collectively visualize what remains 'unspoken' in a makerspace or hackerspace; to analyze the invisibility of conditioning deriving from certain habits and practices; and, finally, to think about which behaviours should be encouraged in order to embody the values of diversity.
 
-- Introduction
-- Warm-up
-    - Round-table - Introduce yourself and tell which machines and tools you use or not use in the fablab and why. (max 5 minutes per participant)
-- Discussion
-    - List the machines&tools of fablabs and understand who's using them, why and how (40 min)
-- Work group
-    - Imagine how to involve a more diverse crowd and make the fablab more accessible (30 min)
-- Wrap up
-    - Write insights from discussion in order to activate best practices and foster equality in accessibility. (30 min)
+- Warm-up:
+    - Introduce yourself and tell which machines and tools you use or not use in your space - makerspace, fablab or hackerspace - and why (5 minutes per participant).
+- Discussion:
+    - For each of the machines and tools, make a list of who is using them, why and how (40 min).
+- Working group:
+    - Imagine how to involve a more diverse crowd and make your space more accessible (30 min).
+- Wrap up:
+    - Write up the main insights from the discussion in order to activate some concrete practices that can foster equality and accessibility (30 min).