Welcoming-new-people.md

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 # First step
 
-Decide if the new person and everyone else will benefit of being in the Telegram Pirate Care Group.
+Decide whether the new person(s) and everyone else will benefit from them being a member of the Telegram Pirate Care Group, our main communication channel.
 
-If yes: provide link to Pirate Care Group.
+If yes: provide them with a link to the Pirate Care Group and/or ask them to download and sign up to Telegram.
 
-Get them in touch with @marcell and @toby so they get the Pirate Care Syllabus git account.
+Get them in touch with @marcell and @toby on Telegram who can help set up a Pirate Care Syllabus git account for them in Gitea, the development infrastructure that supports Syllabus.
 
-If it is already decided what's the page(s) to be translated someone, most of the time that would be @marcell or @toby, should add the new session markdown file with the name: LL.SSSSS.md (LL = language code, SSSS = file name of the original session in English).
+If it has already been decided which page(s) should be translated someone (most of the time that would be @marcell or @toby) should add a new session markdown file with the name: LL.SSSSS.md (LL = language code, SSSS = file name of the original session in English) to Gitea.
 
 The new session file should have a good front matter/header which should loook like:
 ```
 ---
-title: "Klingon: The original session titile"
+title: "Klingon: The original session title"
 images: ["the same if it was present in the original one"]
 ---
 
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 ```
 
-Send the link to the new person so he/she could start translating....
+Send the link to the new person(s) in order for them to start translating....